Over the last couple of weeks, 4KS have been working on improving our writing through using adjectives, adverbs, and more interesting words. Below are some pictures of 'criminal' words - words which are so boring, we don't want to use them in our writing! Can you think of more interesting alternatives for our boring words?
Brilliant blog 4KS. I can think of: glanced instead of looked and stomped instead of walked. Miss Helen
ReplyDeleteHelen I think glanced is a great word. I've thought of glared.
Deletegood word naomi i carn't
Deletethink of any more words.
om my weekend cetral and i ent to learn piono,komon,singing school it was very fantastic day because i went to ate shabushi,the tast of it was so delicous and we can choose everything we want.On the other hand, They have a limite time, the time of it is about 1 hours and 15 minutes.After a while my dad take me home and we went to sleep.
ReplyDeleteBy wanjern: On my holiday I went to my old school when I come back I ate my luch and then I and my sister play some computer my parent was washing some TV tody is my best day.
ReplyDeleteWe could use whispered, shouted or screamed instead of said. Can you think of any more interesting words for said? Miss Katherine
ReplyDeleteIf a word smile we can change it into glade, ya ya
ReplyDeleteIf it a word smile we can change it into glad.
ReplyDeleteyaya
I think we can use laughter and glad instead of using happy
ReplyDeleteBy Prim
I think exited is better
DeleteThese are some more words for big... vast calossol.
ReplyDeleteGood adjectives 4ks they are all very exciting
ReplyDeleteNatasha
Moorside Primary School
what about seeked?
ReplyDeleteYou are right they are boring words.
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